Good newsletter, Mark. I enjoyed reading your poem. I liked it a lot. I also wrote a poem with the title “Disappear” but it is not published yet. It’s for a book I’m writing. I share the revised draft in my latest Substack. Not sure yet if that draft works.
love your poem, a ribbon of a poem, a good form to use to make points about the political without clobbering people, which does no good . . . any reminder to not write SO MUCH, which is my tendency, is a good reminder, so thank you on a number of levels . . . we must keep speaking up in addition to building community
I only read your poem once, Mark, just now, but I like it! Each section could be a small poem on its own, but they are definitely parts of one whole. Considering the first line and the last, it resonates with that "Knock, knock. Who's there" word game I recall from years ago. Each couplet is very thoughtful.
My Sunday reading all laid out for me! ❤️🙏
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Good newsletter, Mark. I enjoyed reading your poem. I liked it a lot. I also wrote a poem with the title “Disappear” but it is not published yet. It’s for a book I’m writing. I share the revised draft in my latest Substack. Not sure yet if that draft works.
Sounds like we're very much on the same page, Dawn :)
Finger on the pulse...
love your poem, a ribbon of a poem, a good form to use to make points about the political without clobbering people, which does no good . . . any reminder to not write SO MUCH, which is my tendency, is a good reminder, so thank you on a number of levels . . . we must keep speaking up in addition to building community
I only read your poem once, Mark, just now, but I like it! Each section could be a small poem on its own, but they are definitely parts of one whole. Considering the first line and the last, it resonates with that "Knock, knock. Who's there" word game I recall from years ago. Each couplet is very thoughtful.